its time to see what i can do )) private

"alright then. you ready?" he asked.

"then let's go." he began walking toward the forest. he turned to face her once they arrived. "go and hunt, and I will be watching out of sight. remember, you may not talk to me or anything during the assessment."

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[ARGH. I had an entire post written and now it's gone! *steaming with anger*     i'm soooooooo p*ssed]

at the sound of tiny paws pattering on the earth, the creamy she-cat dropped to a lower crouch. she pulled herself across the ground, gliding over to a tree. she sniffed the air and then padded on, rounding the corner of the trunk. she disappeared into the bushes and prepared herself for the pounce. a couple moments later she reappeared, the small limp body of a mouse in her jaws. sap glanced around before padding over to a shady spot beneath the tree. she dropped her prey on the ground and kicked leaves and sand over it before continuing on with her hunt.

[open for spectrum to make notes or whatever. this is all i can manage right now.]

the she-cat prowled through the undergrowth until she came out into the open again. relief poured over her. the she-cat scented the air. she smiled. she was upwind so when the wind blew, it carried the scent of rabbit toward her. her prey wouldn't even know she was there! stalking forward, she kept extremely silent, and close to the ground, disguising herself from the prey. as she came up the hill, the rabbit's ears perked up and it turned a little bit. narrowing her eyes, the creamy she-cat flew down the hill and after the prey, just as it was hopping away. before it could get away, saplingpaw lunged forward and grabbed it's neck, pulling it back with her as she slowed to a halt. she nipped it quickly and looked up at the sky, silently thanking starclan for this catch. as sap plucked the prey off the ground, she turned and headed back into the forest, to put this with her previous catch.

sap decided that for spectrum, she would stay in the forest, just for this assessment. besides, nighty would have her get two more catches, and then she would expect to hear the results. saplingpaw crept around a bush quietly, before finally disappearing inside. she swiftly killed a mouse there, and then came out and dropped it on her small pile. she then decided to use a technique she had been working on for awhile. swiftly, the lean she-cat climbed up a tree and perched herself on a branch not too far from the ground, but at least a couple tail-lengths high. she stalked across it to where a bird sat and before she could even approach it, it let out an alarm call and flew a tiny bit away. then, the creamy she-cat flew off the branch and gripped the bird's wing in her claws, lunging forward to give it the death blow. both sap and the bird tumbled onto the ground a bit messily, but the she-cat was proud of her kill. she carried it back to her pile of prey, wondering where spectrumstar was.

[can that be the end of the assessment?]