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Post by Deleted on Sept 24, 2014 3:09:07 GMT
she died
FINALLY
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Post by Horselover on Sept 24, 2014 3:21:59 GMT
Ravenclaw heard blood. Yes, heard. She ran over and stared uncomprehendingly at the silver body. No. No. She couldn't be dead. No. The boss was too tough. Ravenclaw howled in despair, which quickly turned to rage.
The tom back up, snarling.
In one bound, she leaped at him, and ended his life. She screamed again, and turned to the rest of camp, tearing Bloodclan apart.
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Post by spottedleaf on Sept 24, 2014 3:29:37 GMT
Orchidstream perked up as she heard the skull howl. She looked across the battlefield and saw Platinum lying in a pool of blood. Her gaze blurred in fury and she screamed, killing an NPC BloodClanner near her.
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Post by nightlight on Sept 24, 2014 11:11:10 GMT
[lol.... a medic... really?
............. omigosh! plot! crochetpaw can spy on bloodclan!! (she won't be here for this then)]
museless for charries right now
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Post by spottedleaf on Sept 24, 2014 14:39:02 GMT
(Well she was originally a hemlock so...)
Orchidstream calmed down a little and went back to her little group.
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Post by nightwhisper on Sept 25, 2014 14:34:04 GMT
Trinity looked down at the boss' body. No. It couldn't be. The great Platinum, dead? No. No. Her pretty blue eyes hardened as an angry haze swept over them. A BloodClanner raced towards her and she slit it's throat immediately, her paws now stained with blood. She raced around, mercilessly slaughtering every BloodClan cat she saw. You mess with the Platinum Brigade, that will be the end of you. The end of all of you.
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Post by Horselover on Sept 25, 2014 15:05:42 GMT
ravenclaw just stood their, by... it. standing there.
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Post by nightlight on Sept 26, 2014 0:01:16 GMT
and crochetpaw was there in spirit, by ravenclaw. (GRAMMAR ERRORS!) she was starting to get angry with the fact that people went crazy once they saw their clanmate dead.. it was too much exaggeration, unrealisic, unfair to other characters (because the characters strengths and weaknesses are completely unbalanced, making one better than another) and just all these things, over and over and over again. nighty was growing tired and irritated with it. these weren't even their personas!!!!!! trinity? trinity never got angry like that (that we know of). and she is a mayflower too! not some fierce killer.
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Post by Horselover on Sept 26, 2014 1:30:05 GMT
Ravenclaw didn't care. She was really good friends with Patinum, but now the pure back she cat was exhausted. She looked around nervously, trying to see how the battle was going.
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Post by nightwhisper on Sept 26, 2014 14:53:35 GMT
Trinity had just seen her leader DEAD! She wasn't going to stand there and say, "everyone, chill. Don't worry. No need to avenge our leader's death. Let's leave." And maybe if you had checked her BIO in my CHARACTER GALLERY, you would see that she is SHORT TEMPERED, STUBBORN, AND UNFORGIVING.
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Post by nightlight on Sept 27, 2014 0:54:37 GMT
and nighty wasn't directly speaking to whispey. she was just making a note to all roleplayers. besides, there was no need to yell, child. just breath in and relax yourself. everything will be fine...... however, neither nighty or lacey had seen any of these characteristics in the roleplay, and once again... i quote... trinity? trinity never got angry like that ( that we know of). |
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Post by spottedleaf on Sept 28, 2014 16:47:29 GMT
Spotty reminded nighty that this was the Platinum Brigade, trained to fight and be fierce and stuff. And their leader and founder was killed, so...
Orchidstream glanced around at the battle, whirling around as an NPC leaped at her. She growled and rolled under the NPC, slashing at his belly. The NPC attacked again but Orchidstream held her ground and leaped at the last second, landing on his back. She tore mercilessly at his back and flank until he squirmed out of her grip and scampered away.
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Post by nightwhisper on Oct 1, 2014 3:30:39 GMT
Whispey tried very hard not to yell anymore. VERY HARD.
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Post by nightlight on Oct 1, 2014 22:15:16 GMT
once again. THAT WE KNOW OF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
okay.
and i'm museless.
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Post by liara on Oct 5, 2014 1:20:25 GMT
(Ok then. This roleplay slowed down.) Bloodclanners and pro-clanners alike were being killed all around the flame-red tom. His bright eyes looked off to the side, his head turning as if in slow motion to see the dumbstruck vice-leader of the Platinum Brigade staring down at her leader. And again to the right there were angry clan cats killing each other mercilessly, regret-less in the heat of battle. This needed to end, he would not loose anymore of his warriors to the clans that had ganged up on them to seek their revenge. They had back their prisoners, they needed to leave. He saw a prisoner or two emerging from a side alleyway; the Shadowclan shaman Lilacpaw, the Platinum brigade warrior. And then Daggerpaw, who ripped forward to attack as many Bloodclanners as he could in what seemed to be a fit of range.
He has potential
said a voice in the leader's head. And indeed, the jet black wildcat definitely had great potential, perhaps even succeeding that of Flame's.
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